Ha! This is hilarious! I shall definitely check your story out when it's posted (and try and do that sooner rather than later), because the world so needs more good fic with badass!Ellen.
I was particularly amused by every time Ellen calls Dean 'honey', because I had a story where I had to go through and tone down having one particular character call everyone "honey" or "sweetheart" all the time, even though she does do it a lot in canon.
So I'm curious - once you started noticing this, did you go back and remove/change any of these incidents, or try to write few of them in later parts? Or did you just let them appear as they naturally wanted to?
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Date: 2010-05-05 12:45 pm (UTC)I was particularly amused by every time Ellen calls Dean 'honey', because I had a story where I had to go through and tone down having one particular character call everyone "honey" or "sweetheart" all the time, even though she does do it a lot in canon.
So I'm curious - once you started noticing this, did you go back and remove/change any of these incidents, or try to write few of them in later parts? Or did you just let them appear as they naturally wanted to?