wilderthan: ((Akihiko) Oh yeah?)
I've found most of Stephen Lawhead's books disappointing. I read The Paradise War when I was younger and nothing else has ever quite matched up to the vibrancy and life of that one. Byzantium is a stand-alone novel, based on history, not purer fantasy with Celtic roots like The Paradise War, so perhaps that's part of it.

I actually found Byzantium a little ridiculous when I stopped to think about it. I don't presume to know how historically accurate it is, but the entanglement of Vikings, Celtic Christian monks, the Byzantine Empire and the Saracens seems a little... off to me. Especially with the Book of Kells thrown into the mix. But whatever, maybe it's more historical than I think -- truth is stranger than fiction.

But the whole story is just so... implausible. A monk who is chosen, for some reason not really made clear, to go to Byzantium on a pilgrimage. Who has dreams that show him the future. Who gets captured by nice Vikings. And becomes the slave of the king. And gets to Byzantium anyway. And becomes a spy for the emperor. And then ends up in a Muslim amir's house and wants to marry a Muslim woman.

Etc.

Can you see why I raised my eyebrows at this?

The writing is okay, a little "purple prose"ish in places but not too bad overall. Definitely readable, if a bit slow going -- not helped by tiny font-size. I liked some of the characters -- Gunnar and Dugal, particularly -- but mostly got distracted by the improbability of it all. The character of Kazimain seemed entirely superfluous, since she added nothing to the plot, in the end, or to Aidan's character.

The Christian themes were expected, with Stephen Lawhead, but more appropriate here, perhaps, than anywhere else, given that the main character is a monk.
wilderthan: ((Akihiko) Oh yeah?)
The conclusion to the King Raven trilogy is really no different to the other books of the trilogy. The strong point, for me, the thing I found most interesting, was the new interpretation of how the Robin Hood story came about -- although I felt that the epilogue hammered that in maybe a little too much -- and not much else really grabbed me. Again, the writing is pretty good and once I settled down to read it I sped through Tuck in a couple of hours. If you want something easy to read and you like Robin Hood and you're not terribly threatened by a Welsh Robin, then this is definitely worth picking up. Lawhead's writing doesn't really come alive for me here, but nor is it terribly written. Beyond a couple of lines that made me cringe, anyway.

The story is pretty much the traditional Robin Hood, just a bit embroidered with details about Welsh conflicts, Welsh lords, Welsh places. If Lawhead intended this to be an entirely realistic story he should have departed further from the legends, because the things Robin gets away with are unbelievable. Which is, I suppose, some of the attraction about Robin.

The characters still fall relatively flat for me. I didn't feel any particular grief for the deaths, or gladness for the triumphs -- which is odd, considering that these are my people triumphing! For once. There was something very appealing about seeing the Welsh win the day, but... I much prefer it when books make my heart twinge a little, and I didn't get any of that here.

Still, it's a good conclusion to the trilogy, and I'm glad I read it.
wilderthan: ((River) Walk alone)
I still find the setting of this trilogy infinitely more engaging than the actual story. I really want to like it -- a Welsh Robin Hood? -- but it just doesn't grab me. It's not hard to read: I managed most of it in one day. On the other hand, the prose doesn't come to life, I certainly don't savour every word. Robin Hood stories are supposed to be all adventure, and I guess this shows a more realistic, difficult side of it, but I just don't like that as much.

This book gives the reader a more outside view of Bran: we hardly ever know what he's thinking. Instead we have Will Scarlet, who has a reasonably realistic backstory and a kind of narrative voice of his own. I did hear his voice in my head somewhat, those bits aren't badly handled. The thing that did annoy me about them was the "and we trudge on..." bits. So contrived and dry, especially when they come over and over and over again. Will's capture does let us meet Odo, who is a halfway interesting character, especially considering his defection. I kind of liked him.

I didn't feel the romance, either. Not Mérian and Robin, and not Will and his lady. I guess I'm not engaged enough with the characters for that. There continues to be a problem with those, too: they're all painted in broad strokes, good or bad -- but particularly the bad guys. Guy and the Sheriff are particularly bland.

This trilogy is worth reading, though, if only for the fact that it does something new with the old story, and puts it into a new context that might actually be closer to what the original context was. It's nice to see that these stories aren't set in stone, because originally they weren't.
wilderthan: ((SamDean) Facts and weapons)
Stephen Lawhead's new trilogy about Robin Hood, the King Raven trilogy, is pretty unusual in its portrayal of Robin Hood as a Welsh prince in the time of William II rather than a dispossessed aristocrat during Richard the Lionheart's crusades. Stephen Lawhead includes an epilogue, 'Robin Hood in Wales', in which he explains his reasoning.

It will seem strange to many readers, and perhaps even perverse, to take Robin Hood out of Sherwood Forest and relocate him in Wales; worse still, to remove all trace of Englishness, set his story in the eleventh century, and recast the honourable outlaw as an early British freedom fighter. My contention is that although in Nottingham, the Robin Hood legends found good soil in which to grow -- they must surely have originated elsewhere.


As far as I can tell, Lawhead's hypothesis is reasonable. I kind of wish he'd included a list of sources, maybe referenced some other writers, as I know nothing else about this. It's kind of appropriate that I read this now: I go to a Welsh university where I'm going to be studying the Robin Hood tradition next semester! If anyone knows where to find research related to this, I'd be really happy.

It doesn't seem so implausible that the stories could have originated in Wales, for a start. At heart, the tactics of Robin Hood seem similar to the tactics adopted by the Welsh. Ultimately unsuccessful tactics, obviously. And the Robin Hood stories were originally just a collection of oral folklore, probably appreciated most in places where people most felt that someone needed to be sticking it to the man. Minstrels would apparently attach local place names to the tales, to make them more interesting to the listeners. It'd probably be impossible now to figure out exactly where the stories originated from, really.

It's interesting that two key, quintessentially English heroes were, to differing degrees of verifiability, actually appropriated from the Welsh.

As for the English Robin Hood with whom we are all so familiar... just as Arthur, a Briton, was later Anglicised -- made into the quintessential English king and hero by the same enemy Saxons he fought against -- a similar makeover must have happened to Robin.


I imagine that the 'makeover' for Robin was less conscious than with Arthur, but it's still interesting that if you dig, the two main English heroes might not be so English at all. Note that Briton refers to the indigenous population of the British Isles, before the Angles, Saxons and Normans.

Reading reviews of this book all over the internet makes me feel a little sick when they declare that of course Robin could never be Welsh -- and I seriously quote: "Nothing good ever came out of Wales." And others who were just uncomfortable with a Welsh Robin. Which doesn't surprise me, knowing how English people have reacted in the past to me pointing out that the first Arthur stories were Welsh. If the Robin Hood legends are somehow holy for you, then don't try this trilogy -- you won't like it.

Saying that, despite the unusual choice of setting, the story isn't all that different. Even though Stephen Lawhead acknowledges that Maid Marian was a sixteenth century addition to the legend, one of the characters does indeed go by the name Mérian. There's also John (Iwan), Tuck (Aethelfrith), Guy... They don't all join the story in the traditional way, but the plot remains pretty close. Robin himself is actually called Bran, in this story: Rhi Bran.

There's a lot that could be very, very interesting about this book. It definitely makes me grin that the Welsh are so positively portrayed and their opponents rather negatively portrayed, and the idea of a Welsh Robin is, as far as I can tell, pretty bold and new. The bias and setting are new, the drawing on Celtic myth is interesting. I did recognise some bits that seemed to come right out of Lawhead's earlier research and invention for The Paradise War.

One thing that definitely impressed me was the sensitivity to language. There were Welsh names scattered through it, for people and for places, and the Normans used French phrases and words. The Welsh didn't call themselves Welsh, which of course, they wouldn't have done. The word "Welsh" originates from the Saxon "wealas", which means foreigner. I smiled a little to read the Welsh calling themselves Cymry. Definitely appropriate.

I have to say that it didn't come together into a whole very well for me, unfortunately. Robin himself isn't terribly likeable -- he thinks he's God's gift to women, he wants to please himself, almost abandons his people... He does eventually return to his duty, and take up his burden, but then he's a rather distant character, I found, and I still didn't connect with him. Which is awkward, given that traditionally he is one of the most sympathetic characters. Most of the characters weren't really fleshed out, and I kept getting flashbacks to the recent BBC adaptation of Robin Hood to fill in the gaps... It doesn't help that the portrayals are quite one-sided -- the Normans are grasping, greedy, the Welsh are the beleaguered peasants. We all know who is Right and who is Wrong -- there's very little blurring of that, which could've made it richer and more interesting.

The story itself moves slowly, and by the end of the book the adventure we all know so well is only just kicking off. In a way, that's good, because we now have a good and solid background, with the different political situation laid out for us. The players are in place, hopefully the next books will be less about set up.

Lawhead's writing is pretty readable, and not purple prose like his early stuff, but in itself this first book doesn't draw me into the trilogy very well. It may pick up from here, but either way, I'm reading it mostly because I'm interested in the underlying ideas.
wilderthan: ((Dr Horrible) Status quo)
I ended up giving up on this book. I tend to like Stephen Lawhead's writing, or I certainly did when I was little, but this is really, really purple prose. There's thinly veiled references to Christianity, which don't ordinarily bother me, but which began to build up. There was a terrible love scene, from which I have a quote that makes me die a little:

"There is trouble, Bria. I feel it, though all about me appears peaceful and serene. I start at shadows, and night gives no rest; it is as if the wind itself whispers an alarm to my ears, but no sound is heard."
Bria sighed deeply and clutched him tighter. "What is happening? What will become of us, my darling?"
"I do not know. But I promise you this: I will love you forever."
They held each other for awhile, and the sun rose and filled the sky with golden light.
"See how the sun banishes the darkness. So love will send our troubles fleeing far from us -- I promise."
"Can love accomplish so much, do you think?" Bria said dreamily.
"It can do all things."


Seriously? Ugh.

Add to that my growing feeling that women are reduced to wives in the story -- even in the first book, now I actually think about it. Alinea can't possibly rule in her husband's stead, it seems. Bria isn't even considered for the succession. No, it's the big brave strong religious men must save the world.

Okay, I get writing in a kind of medievalish world. But seriously, it's another world! You don't have to carry our medieval society over!

I'd still be reading, though, despite this, if the characters were somewhat more than cardboard cutouts, or the story at all original. Not impressed.
wilderthan: ((Fujin) Won't understand)
In the Hall of the Dragon King is pretty much typical fantasy. I like Stephen Lawhead's writing, and in terms of my synesthesia this tastes good, but it reads like amateur fantasy. It's a really typical, predictable plot with an evil-for-the-sake-of-evil character and a young "chosen one" type character, the characters are generally archetypes or not well developed. The references to Christianity don't even attempt to be subtle. The Big Bad is defeated too easily, everything is resolved very quickly...

I'm not sure where the scope for a sequel is, since I think this simplistic world doesn't provide a good foundation, but I'm going to read the other two books of the trilogy. It's fun mindless fantasy.

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