The actual fic is quite serious, for the most part, so this might be false advertising... *laughs*
I did pare down the 'honey' just a little, though for the most part I left it intact -- I've been working mainly on my dialogue in writing for a long time, so for the most part it felt/looked natural. I'm doing a final sweep soon, so a couple more might bite the dust, but we'll see...
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Date: 2010-05-05 12:51 pm (UTC)I did pare down the 'honey' just a little, though for the most part I left it intact -- I've been working mainly on my dialogue in writing for a long time, so for the most part it felt/looked natural. I'm doing a final sweep soon, so a couple more might bite the dust, but we'll see...