Having no familiarity with the fandom at all, I can give you a technical review! :D
I like this--the pacing is quite good, and it flows well for the most part. Will's bit about Arthur and the sword is reading kind of stilted, though. You might want to glance over that. The last line is fantastic. :D
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I like this--the pacing is quite good, and it flows well for the most part. Will's bit about Arthur and the sword is reading kind of stilted, though. You might want to glance over that. The last line is fantastic. :D